FAWM: February Album Writing Month 2004


23 February 2004 (Monday)

wferenbaugh [03:54AM CST]
numero 8 - jennifer ... WMA file here
(or "jenny" or "jealous again"...)

burr totally beat me to the drunken bar song, and then to the hasty tribute song to movie jennifer. of course, our jennifers differ in several ways... i had much higher hopes. not even good enough to be called a weird al ripoff.

the haste of the fawm is bringing out the goofy songs in me. usually i write down lots of titles, a majority of them are silly, but most of the silly ones never get written. i've been recording a album-like thing lately collected from the last 4 years of songwriting, and most of the songs are dead-serious.


jennifer

i will throw my voice in with
  the very vocal global chorus
   saying you'd be wise to thank your lucky stars
you found a man and for the most part
  every man is made the same but, jenny,
   some men come from from different parts of mars

    maybe it's been blown out of proportion
    maybe he's a man and not a god
    maybe you've done deeds i haven't seen
     thereby earning that fantastic hunk of fortune
      that you've got

i'd just like to say that i've been watching
  ever since he did those great montana movies
   all those years ago
and by association, now i'm almost
  as obsessed with you, but still your role
   will always be a cameo... a sideshow

    baby, i say more power to you
    baby, you got something goin' on
    baby, i've no doubt he's got his reasons,
     and it's true: you've come a long long way
      since "leprechaun"

      i could do without friends
      i could do without friends
      i could do without friends
      i could do without friends


i should end with an apollygy
  to elvis and to tutone and to you all
   for the ending of this song
i wouldn't argue if you argued
  this is utter sacrilege, you know,
   my hand was forced when polly came along

Comments: 6

on jennifer's behalf, she has a big role in one of my most favorite comedies of all time - Office space, but now that I think about it, she's not that funny in it, but everyone else is...ha ha, funny ending. you make some fine points in the lyrics and put a voice to what as you say is a "very vocal global chorus"...however, the song itself I would tire of given time...just my 2 cents.

hopper [11:47PM CST 23-Feb-2004]

i'm not so sure how tiring this would get if it were arranged and recorded right. maybe, but i dunno.

sorry to rain on your parade twice, there, willis. ;)

burr [12:01AM CST 24-Feb-2004]

recorded right?!?

willis [07:13PM CST 24-Feb-2004]

and i'm not against jennifer at all. whatever makes him happy.

i liked her in "bruce almighty" and "office space", though she was unspectacular. and i seem to recall thinking that "the good girl" was maybe kinda brilliant. haven't seen "along came polly" yet.

willis [07:19PM CST 24-Feb-2004]

I think Burr is referring to spending $60K to produce the song with Brian Wilson, agonizing over every minor detail until a masterpiece emerges...

hopper [09:25PM CST 24-Feb-2004]

*sigh*

burr [09:44PM CST 24-Feb-2004]