Re: Re POEM Me. Con

[Hong Lam Vu <vuh000@goofy.zdv.Uni-Mainz.de>]

Chao chi Nguyen Thuc Anh,

Ne^'u tui trung tha`nh vo+'i thu<ye^'t cu?a hai ba'c Aiviet va` Diem Quynh
thi` cha(?ng da'm gia? nho+`i Chi. vi` "Ai viet Ai' Vie^.t la` kho^ng
bie^'t Aiviet". Tho^i thi` cu+' ddoa'n mo` bu+'c thu* cu?a Chi.

On Mon, 9 Jun 1997, AUH NGUYEN wrote:

> Hi anh Hong Lam Vu and all
> Cam on vi su phan tich kha sac sao cua anh ve bai tho vo danh. Xin loi ca=
 nha=20
> vi toi type nham cau dau cua bai tho, xin duoc sua lai
>=20
>      Con dda^u bie^'t phu't con ro+`i lo`ng me.
>      .........
>=20
> DDu+'ng o vi tri " coi dung trau", toi co' mot so diem muon ban cung anh =
va=20
                     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Tui chi.u kho^ng di.ch no^?i.

> moi nguoi.
>=20
>     Neu tac gia cua bai tho biet anh dung dong tu " chu+?i nguoi sinh ra =
minh"
> chac se gian anh lam lam day. Am dieu xuyen suot bai tho la noi buon cua =
mot
> tam trang cay dang, loanh quoanh khong biet dau la nhan qua, dde^? roi dd=
o^?
> lo^~i vaf oan trach vo^ tinh. Oan trach thi van duoc tha thu, chu chu+?i =
thi
> ....

A` ca'i chu+~ "chu+?i" na`y co' li.ch su+? cu?a no'. Ho^`i VNSA co`n la^~m
cha^~m ho.c ddi, co' cuo^.c tranh lua^.n ve^` ca'ch du`ng tu+` tie^'ng
Vie^.t giu+~a 2 "phe", phe du`ng vo+'i value laden va` phe d`ng vo+'i
value neutral. tui thuo^.c phe sau. The^m nu+~a, ho^`i ddo' tui cu~ng co'
vie^'t cho*i mo^.t ba`i La.m ba`n ve^` truo+`ng pha'i "chu+?i" trong va(n
ho.c VN dduo+ng dda.i, trong ddo' tui vo+ he^#t ca? ca'c vi. Duo+ng thu
Huo+ng, Nguye^~n Huy Thie^.p, Pha.m Thi. Hoa`i, Tra^`n Ma.nh Ha?o va`o
truo+`ng pha'i na`y, ma(.c du` ne^'u du`ng tu+` "chu+?i" vo+'i
negative connotation thi` nhie^`u vi. trong ddo' tui kho^ng da'm vo+ va`o.
Tu+` "chu+?i" tui du`ng o+? dda^y tuo+ng dduo+ng vo+'i tu+` "phe^ pha'n",
"che^ bai", etc. trong ngo^n ngu+~ va(n ho.c cao ca^#p.


>=20
>    DDie^?m nua anh noi rang Co tich co' ca? thien, ca? ac nhung doi khi c=
hien
>  thang cua phe thien thi khong thien chut nao nhu truong hop co Tam. Dong=
 y
> voi anh 50% va se bay to quan diem cua minh ve nhan vat nay trong lan kha=
c.
> Nhung neu khong co chao nuoc soi cua Tam, lieu bao gio mam mong toi ac se=
 het.
> Toi khong tin vao thuyet " an tra oan , oan tieu tan" nghe co ve cai luon=
g=20
> qua.
>=20

Dda^'y nhe', va^.y la` to^.i a'c cu?a Ta^'m (cha?o nuo+'c so^i, la`m
ma('M) duo+.c bie^.n lua^.n la` dde^? die^.t he^'t ma^`m mo^'ng cu=DFa
to^.i a'c. Theo to^i,  ca'i thuye^'t pha?i du`ng to^.i a#c thi`=20
mo+'i co' the^? die^.t HE^'T MA^`M MO^'NG cu?a to^.i a#c, tu+. no' ma^u
thua^~n, vi` sau khi "die^.t he^'t ma^`m mo^'ng to^.i a'c" thi` ma^`m
mo^'ng to^.i a'c va^~n co`n dda^'y, vo+'i ca'i to^.i a'c du`ng dde^?
die^.t to^.i a'c. Ca'i thuy<e^'t kia cu~ng ca?i luo+ng tha^.t, va` tui=20
cu~ng kho^ng tin va`o thuy<e^'t ddo'.=20

To^i thi` kho^ng thi'ch la`m vie^.c vo+'i tu+` "to^.i a'c" vi` tu+` na`y
value laden qu'a. Cho phe'p tui thay ba(`ng tu+` "ba.o lu+.c", to^?ng
qu#at ho+n, va` ddo+~  normative ho+n. Cu*' quan sa#t li.ch su+? cho
dde^'n nay thi`:

1_ Kho^ng the^? die^.t dduo+.c ba.o lu+.c, chi? co' the^? che^' ngu+. no'
2_ Ba.o lu+.c la` ca^`n thie^'t dde^? che^' ngu+. ba.o lu+.c.
3_ Gia?i phja'p (nu+?a vo+`i) cu?a loa`i nguo+`i cho vie^.c che^' ngu+.
ba.o lu+.c la` ta^.p trung ba.o lu+.c va`o tay nha` nuo+'c: Nha` nuo+'c
co' ddo^.c quye^`n su+? du.ng ba-o lu+.c (mo^.t ca'ch ho+.p pha'p).
4_ Chi? co' mo^.t so^' ca'ch dde^? che^' ngu+. la.i ba.o lu+.c cu?a nha`
nuo+'c, nhu+ng ro^'t cuo^.c va^~n pha?i cha^'p nha^.n do^.c quye^`n su+?
du.ng ba.o lu+.c cu?a nha` nuo+#c.=20

>   Anh trach nguoi ddan ba bo? con o lo gach, vi sao lai ac doc hon bo cho=
+.

Vi` o+? cho+. thi` ddo^ng nguo+`i, cho^~ lo` ga.ch thi` va('ng nguo+`i.
Bo? con o+? cho+. thi` xa'c sua^'t so^'ng so't cu?a ddu+'a tre? se~ cao
ho+n.

> Toi con nho doan cuoi cung trong phim " Lang Vu dai ngay ay" la hinh anh =
thi
> No ngoai nhin cai lo gach, cai no^i cua cac the he Chi Pheo. Bong toi bao=
=20
> phu guong mat, con duong sau lung va truoc mat nguoi dan ba ay. Roi sau d=
o=20
> chi ddi dau, chung ta khong biet vi Nam Cao khong noi. Chi biet rang dda^=
't
> le^` que tho'i se~ kho^ng buong tha cai an " khong chong... " den cuoi do=
i.
> Lieu nguoi dan ba bat hanh va do+? hoi ay co che cho noi cho dua con cua =
minh
> khong. Co khi bo no o lo gach  mong nhan duoc mot chut tinh thuong cua ng=
uoi=20
> doi con hon bat no cu`ng lang thang ga'nh chi.u toi loi cua nguoi sinh ra=
 no.  Hoan canh tao ra so phan va co le so phan cua thi No la khong duoc la=
m me voi  dung nghia. Vi the
> toi van cu+' khang dinh voi anh Me nao cung thuong con. Moi lan ga^'p cuo=
n
> Bi vo, toi van nhu nghe thay tieng goi con xe ruot cua co gai bui doi Tam=
 Binh.
> De chien thang duoc so phan va duoc lam nguoi me dich thuc, chac khong de=
 dang
> nhu bay gio. Truoc kia khi doc Nhung nguoi khon kho vaf Tat den, toi cu+'=
 so=20
> sanh giua chi Dau va Phang tin, ai la nguoi yeu con hon. Va cu+' tu+. hoi=
, sao
> Phang tin da ban toc, rang va hy sinh ban than minh vi con, con chi Dau l=
ai
> ban con. Neu chi Dau hanh dong nhu Phang tin thi cao ca hon nhieu. Nhung =
sau
> nay khi doc them Tu luc Van doan , hieu hon mot chut ve xa hoi Viet nam t=
huo
> Tat den, toi khong trach chi Dau nua.
>=20

Ca'i a'c o+? dda^y la` ca'i a'c local. Cu`ng mo^.t ha`nh ddo^.ng, trong
chu+`ng mu+.c na`y thi` la` "a'c", xe't trong 1 chu+`ng mu+.c kha'c thi`
la.i kho^ng ha(?n la` a'c, co' khi la.i la` ngupo+.c la.i. Cu~ng
va^.y, mo^.t ha`nh do^.ng "dda'ng tra'ch" la.i co' the^? "kho^ng dda'ng
tra'ch" khi dda(.t trong mo^.t hoa`n ca?nh ro^.ng lo+'n ho+n. Nhu+ vi' du.
cu?a chi.

Cu~ng chi'nh vi` ti'nh tuo+ng ddo^'i cu=DFa caa'c kha'i nie^.nm normative
ma` tui du`ng tu+` "chu+?i" without normative connotation. Xe't trong
mo^.t ta^`m mu+'c kha'c ddi, "chu+?i" la.i co' the^? dduo+.c dda'nh gia'
la` "khen".

Xin lo^~i vi` ca#ch a(n no'i "trie^#t ly'" qu#a, nhu+ng vi` chi. vie^'t
nghie^m tu'c qu#a ne^n to^i kho^ng da'm hu? le^'u o+? trong msg na`y.

Cheers,
La^m