Re: La.i tho+ Ddu+o+`ng

[Dinh Van An <divan@presto.phys.sci.osaka-u.ac.jp>]

Hi ba'c Ho`a,
 Cho to^i su+?a 2 chu+~ trong ba`i di.ch cu?a ba'c va` xin ba'c gia?i
thi'ch the^m mo^.t chu't:

Hoa Nguyen wrote:
> 
> Cha`o ba'c Hoa`ng Linh
>          (va` ca'c ba'c thi'ch tho+ Ddu+o+`ng),
> 
> Ddo^.c To.a Ki'nh Di`nh So+n
> 
> Chu'ng ddie^?u cao phi ta^.n
> Co^ va^n ddo^.c khu+' nha`n
> Tu+o+ng khan lu+o+~ng ba^'t ye^'m
> Duy hu+~u Ki'nh Ddi`nh so+n .
>                          Ly' Ba.ch
> 
> Ngo^`i Mo^.t Mi`nh Tre^n Nu'i Ki'nh Ddi`nh
> 
> Chim ba^`y bay cao ma^'t
> Ma^y le? lu+?ng lo+ tro^i

To^i xin ddo^?i 2 chu+~ "Lu+?ng lo+" tha`nh "lu+~ng lo+`":
 
 Ma^y le? lu+~ng lo+` tro^i



> Nhi`n nhau hoa`i kho^ng cha'n

  O+? dda^y ba'c di.ch la` "nhi`n nhau hoa`i kho^ng cha'n", to^i kho^ng
hie^?u ca'i gi` nhi`n nhau, xin ba'c gia?i thi'ch cho. Thie^?n y' cu?a
to^i la`: chim ba^`y thi` bay ma^'t, co^ va^n cu~ng lo tro^i ddi, va^.y
ai nhi`n ai? 

> Chi? nu'i Ki'nh Ddi`nh tho^i .

 Theo ca^u tho+ go^'c thi` "Chi?" o+? dda^y la` "Chi? co'" (Duy hu+~u). 
Va^.y nghi~a cu?a ca^u tho+ na`y trong ma.ch tho+ la` gi` ne^'u co' ca^u
"nhi`n nhau hoa`i kho^ng cha'n"-:)).
 To^i ho+i tha+'c ma+'c la`:
 "Tu+o+ng khan lu+o+~ng ba^'t ye^'m" o+? tre^n la` giu+~a ta'c gia? va`
"chu'ng ddie^?u" vo+'i "co^ va^n", nhu+ng dda~ "NHI`N NHAU hoa`i kho^ng
cha'n" thi` e kho^ng ho+.p vo+'i "chu'ng ddie^?u cao phi ta^.n". 
 The^m nu+~a "Duy hu+~u Ki'nh DDi`nh So+n" nghi~a bo'ng la` "chi? co`n
ngo.n Ki'nh DDi`nh la` co`n o+? la.i vo+'i ta"  thi` ca^u "nhi`n nhau
hoa`i kho^ng cha'n" co' le~ chu+a ho+.p va+n ca?nh: ddie^?u chu'ng va`
co^ va^n bo? ddi, duy co`n la.i ngo.n Ki'nh ddi`nh.
 Kho^ng bie^'t to^i hie^?u ba`i tho+ tre^n co' ddu'ng kho^ng xin ba'c
chi? gia'o!

>                          H.N.

-- 
Dinh Van An
 :http://ann.phys.wani.osaka-u.ac.jp/~an/