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Re: [tho+ ti`nh] Tho+ vie^'t o+? bie^?n





On Mon, 28 Apr 1997, Thang Dinh Bui wrote:

> DDo' la` no^~i co^ ddo+n  me^nh mo^ng, da die^'t nha^'t ma` to^i ddu+o+.c
> bie^'t
> trong tho+ ti`nh. Ne^'u to^i nho+' kho^ng nha^`m thi` ca^u dda^`u tie^n
> la` 
> "Anh xa em "

Ba'c Tha('ng, to^i ddo.c co' ba?n Internet che'p "anh xa em", nhu+ng 
ddo.c  ba?n chi'nh o+? sa'ch thi` che'p la` "anh o+? xa", ne^n dda`nh
cu+' sao y ba?n chi'nh va^.y.

Personally, to^i tha^'y "anh o+? xa" hay ho+n. "Anh xa em" nghe thu+o+`ng 
va` cu~ qua', va` kho^ng toa't ddu+o+.c le^n ca'i y' "xa me^nh mo^ng" cu?a
ca^u "anh o+? xa", ta.o ne^n bo+?i a^m ddie^.u chu+~ "xa" o+? cuo^'i ca^u.

Va? la.i, ddo.c ca^u dda^`u "anh o+? xa" chu+a hie^?u ro~ ta'c gia? 
ddi.nh vie^'t gi`, Dde^'n ca^u "Va('ng ca'nh buo^`m mo^.t chu't dda~ co^ 
ddo+n" thi` dda~ ddoa'n ddu+o+.c ra, dde^? ro^`i ddi dde^'n ddi?nh ddie^?m
"Gio' kho^ng pha?i la` roi ma` va'ch nu'i pha?i mo`n,
Em kho^ng pha?i la` chie^`u ma` nhuo^.m anh dde^'n ti'm".

Su+. build-up ti`nh ca?m tu+` cho^~ ba^ng quo+ "anh o+? xa" to+'i cho^~ do^`n
ne'n, ma~nh lie^.t, da die^'t va^.y mo+'i la`m ba`i tho+ hay. Chu+' co`n mo+? 
ba`i dda~ la`m bu.p mo^.t ca^u "anh xa em" thi` y' qu'a ro~, suspense
build-up bie^'n ma^'t sa.ch, ba`i tho+ gia?m hay. 

DDa^'y la` to^i bi`nh la'o, "mu'a ri`u qua ma('t tho+." va^.y, ca'c ba'c 
ddu+`ng cha^'p. Bi`nh ba^.y dde^? ca'c ba'c tha^'y bo.n da^n ngu khu 
dden nhu+ to^i thu+?o+?ng thu+'c tho+ ra sao. Vie^'t tho+ cho qua^`n 
chu'ng ddo.c, thi?nh thoa?ng nghe qua^`n chu'ng bi`nh la'o cu~ng co' ca'i 
vui cu?a no'. :-)

Tha^n, Ha?i.


> > THO+ VIE^'T O+? BIE^?N
> > 		
> > 	Hu+~u Thi?nh
> > 
> > Anh o+? xa
> > Tra(ng cu~ng le?
> > Ma(.t tro+`i cu~ng le?
> > Bie^?n va^~n ca^.y mi`nh da`i ro^.ng the^'
> > Va('ng ca'nh buo^`m mo^.t chu't
> > dda~ co^ ddo+n
> > 
> > Gio' kho^ng pha?i la` roi ma` va'ch nu'i pha?i mo`n
> > Em kho^ng pha?i la` chie^`u ma` nhuo^.m anh dde^'n ti'm
> > So'ng cha(?ng ddi dde^'n dda^u
> > 			ne^'u kho^ng ddu+a em dde^'n
> > Du` so'ng dda~ la`m anh
> > Nghie^ng nga?
> > Vi` em 
> > 
> > (Ru't trong ta^.p "100 ba`i tho+ ti`nh cho.n lo.c")