Re: (test) Re: Mot cach nhin doi dang so; ca'ch "phe ^bi`nh" cu?a TMH

[Dinh Van An <divan@presto.phys.sci.osaka-u.ac.jp>]

Hi ba'c Hoang Linh va` ca'c ba'c,
 Ho^m nay ddo.c ddu+o+.c ba`i cu?a ba'c A'iVie^.t vie^'t hay qua', ca?m
o+n ba'c A'i Vie^.t ra^'t nhie^`u. 
 Va` cu~ng ca?m o+n ba'c Hoang Linh again, xin ddu+o+.c trao ddo^?i
tie^'p vo+'i ba'c.

Hoang Linh wrote:
> 
> Hi bac An,
> 
> Rat vui duoc trao doi voi bac! Toi voi nen viet khong dau, xin bac thong cam
> cho!
> 
> Truoc het, toi xin co vai y kien nhu sau:
> 
> 1. De binh luan "CHCC", LE RA ta chi nen dua vao van ban "CHCC". Moi khen
> che, du la "boc thom" hay "boc thoi", LE RA khong nen dua vao he qui chieu
> khi ta nhan dinh "CHCC".

    DDo^`ng y vo+'i ba'c.
 
> 2. De danh gia bai "phe binh" "CHCC" cua TMH, LE RA ta cung chi nen can cu
> vao bai viet do (toi da tim va doc ngay sau khi viet cai mesg dau tien cho
> bac; du sao cung xin cam on bac Hoa da repost). Khong can biet qua khu TMH
> ra sao, khong can biet con nguoi ong ta the nao...

   Va` to^'t nha^'t la` ddo.c ca? ba`i phe^ bi`nh la^~n ta'c pha^?m ma`
ba`i phe^ bi`nh dde^` ca^.p. Ta'ch ro+`i  phe^ bi`nh vo+'i ta'c pha^?m
kha'c gi` tha^`y bo'i mu` so+` voi pha?i kho^ng ba'c. Chi'nh vi` ddie^?m
na`y ma` ma+.c du` to^i kho^ng thi'ch phong ca'ch phe^ bi`nh cu?a TMH
nhu+ng cu~ng kho^ng the^? xem vie^.c dda'nh gia' ba`i phe^ bi`nh cu?a
TMH theo ca'ch cu?a mo^.t so~' ba'c tre^n VNSA la` nghie^m tu'c.

 
> Do la trong truong hop ly tuong. Rat tiec la ban than toi cung da khong lam
> duoc dieu do, nen cu "day mo re ma" khong ra lam sao ca. Nhan day, xin cao
> loi voi (cac) bac, trong khi viet voi, co the co nhung cau, chu chua chi?nh,
> chua thich hop...

  Ba'c kho^ng pha?i a'y na'y gi`, ba'c vie^'t ra^'t de^~ thu+o+ng cho
ne^n du` co' va`i cho^~ chu+a trau chuo^'t thi` cha+'c mo.i ngu+o+`i
va^~n vui ve? khen-:))
 
 
> Toi da doc xong, doc ky bai "phe binh" cua TMH, va thay no khong khac gi
> nhung bai ma TMH da viet de "phe binh" cac tac gia khac, tu truoc den nay.
> Co le khong co gi de noi ve loi "phe binh" do, nhung neu phai neu vai nhan
> xet thi toi cung se mao muoi viet ra, chi xin bac cho vai ngay cho cai dau
> no "nguoi" da. :-))

   To^i xin cho+` ba'c va^.y-:))
 
> >   To^i  ho+i kha'c vo+'i o^ng tha^`y  ve^` ca'ch nhi`n ve^` "ga^y so'ng
> >gio'" tre^n va+n dda`n.
> >  Giu+~a sa^n bo'ng ha.ng xoa`ng thi` co' the^? co' ca^`u thu? to^`i ga^y
> >so'ng gio' nhu+ng trong mo^.t ddo^.i bo'ng ta^`m co+~ thi` anh cha`ng
> >na`y (ne^'u co') se~ bi. mo+`i ddi nha+.t bo'ng cho ddo^`ng ddo^.i ta^.p
> >tru+o+'c khi bi. mo+`i ra kho?i ddo^.i hi`nh vi~nh vie^~n.
> 
> Xin bac doc them mot chut cai mesg toi viet tra loi bac Hoa (Tuan), de hieu
> toi noi ve "song gio", tuc la "song gio" nhu the nao.
>
 
  To^i la.i nghi~ la` so'ng gio' cu?a ke? ta`i hoa chu+' kie^?u Chi'
Phe`o thi` la`m sao to^`n ta.i tre^n sa^n bo'ng chuye^n nghie^.p?

> Xin cham dut cai so sanh ve cau thu bong da o day, vi no khong phai do toi
> nghi ra!

  Ba'c la.i tra'nh ro^`i-:)). To^i thie^?n nghi~ ba'c tri'ch da^~n lo+`i
cu?a o^ng tha^`y la` dde^? ba`y to? quan ddie^?m cu?a mi`nh chu+'.

 
> >  Va+n ho.c o+? ta^`m co+~ quo^'c gia khong pha?i la` xo' la`ng Vu~ DDa.i
> >dde^? ca'c chu' Chi' Phe`o tha ho^` chu+?i, mo^.t ke? do^'t na't kho^ng
> >the^? vie^'t ra ddu+o+.c nhu+~ng thu+' ga^y xo^n xao va+n dda`n chu+'
> >ddu+`ng no'i dde^'n chuye^.n ga^y  so'ng gio'. Muo^'n la`m Chi' Phe`o
> >trong va+n ho.c pha?i co' tri' tue^. va` ta`i na+ng chu+' kho^ng pha?i
> >chi? ca^`n mo^.t ma?nh chai vo+~ la` ddu?.
> 
> Cai nay, toi chua du suc de nhan xet xem co dung hay khong. Nhung de chinh
> xac hoa, toi nghi la ta nen viet nhu sau: Muo^'n la`m Chi' Phe`o
> MOT CACH DA`I HA.N trong va+n ho.c pha?i co' tri' tue^. va` ta`i na+ng chu+'
> kho^ng pha?i chi? ca^`n mo^.t ma?nh chai vo+~ la` ddu?."

  Co' le~ chi'nh xa'c thi` pha?i vie^'t nhu+ ba'c, nhu+ng so'ng gio'
cu?a ba'c e  kha'c vo+'i so'ng gio' theo to^i hie^?u ro^`i cha+ng?
 
> >  Co' the^? nhu+ ba'c vie^'t: TMH ba^'t ca^.p trong phong ca'ch phe^
> >bi`nh cu?a mi`nh. DDie^?m na`y to^i nghi~ co' the^? co'. Nhu+ng "ra^'t
> >ke'm co?i" thi` ba'c ho+i...vo^.i cha+ng?.
> 
> Toi xin duoc giu nhan xet (ve kha nang PHE BINH VA LY LUAN cua TMH; toi
> khong co y noi ve cac "bo mon" khac cua ong ay) nay cua minh.

   Ba'c la`m to^i to` mo` qua'-:)). Cha+'c ba`i vie^'t sa+'p to+'i cua
ba'c se~ cho TMH mo^.t cu' ne^n tha^n-:))). 
 
> Toi se viet ve bai "phe binh" cua TMH sau, duoc khong bac?

  To^i mong la+'m dda^'y ! Xin ba'c chie^'u co^' cho.

> 
> >   La^u nay ca'i "chu? quan" cu?a ba'c co' ve? cha?y co' do`ng
> >dda^'y-:))))
> 
> Do`ng gi ho+? ba'c? Va do`ng, hay gio`ng? :-))

  The^' ba'c thi'ch do`ng hay gio`ng? -:)
 
> Neu bac cho dia chi, toi se gui mot so cuon sach ma toi co trong tay, de bac
> tham khao.

  Phie^`n ba'c qua' vo+'i la.i to^i bie^'t la^'y gi` dda'p la.i ba'c.
Du` no'i va^.y nhu+ng trong tha^m ta^m to^i va^~n mong ddu+o+.c ba'c
gu+?i cho-:))). Ca?m o+n ba'c tha^.t nhie^`u ve^` nha~ y' na`y.
 
> Hi vong se con co dip trao doi voi bac!

  Hy vo.ng ba'c kho^ng cha'n!

 Ngoa`i le^` 1 chu't: Hi`nh nhu+ ba'c la` " ta'c pha^?m" cu?a tho+`i
ca?i ca'ch tie^'ng Vie^.t : chu+~ "HY" ddu+o+.c vie^'t tha`nh "hi"-:)))
> HLinh
> 
 
-- 
Dinh Van An

URL:http://ann.phys.wani.osaka-u.ac.jp/~an/