Re: (test) Re: Mot cach nhin doi dang so; ca'ch "phe ^bi`nh" cu?a TMH

["Hoang Linh" <linh_ngan@hotmail.com>]

Hi bac An,

Rat vui duoc trao doi voi bac! Toi voi nen viet khong dau, xin bac thong cam 
cho!

Truoc het, toi xin co vai y kien nhu sau:

1. De binh luan "CHCC", LE RA ta chi nen dua vao van ban "CHCC". Moi khen 
che, du la "boc thom" hay "boc thoi", LE RA khong nen dua vao he qui chieu 
khi ta nhan dinh "CHCC".

2. De danh gia bai "phe binh" "CHCC" cua TMH, LE RA ta cung chi nen can cu 
vao bai viet do (toi da tim va doc ngay sau khi viet cai mesg dau tien cho 
bac; du sao cung xin cam on bac Hoa da repost). Khong can biet qua khu TMH 
ra sao, khong can biet con nguoi ong ta the nao...

Do la trong truong hop ly tuong. Rat tiec la ban than toi cung da khong lam 
duoc dieu do, nen cu "day mo re ma" khong ra lam sao ca. Nhan day, xin cao 
loi voi (cac) bac, trong khi viet voi, co the co nhung cau, chu chua chi?nh, 
chua thich hop...

>    The^' thi` to^i pha?i ddo+.i ba'c ddo.c xong ba`i phe^ bi`nh cu?a TMH
>ro^`i mo+'i ddu+o+.c ddo.c ba`i "Phe^ bi`nh TMH" cu?a ba'c dda^y-:))).

Toi da doc xong, doc ky bai "phe binh" cua TMH, va thay no khong khac gi 
nhung bai ma TMH da viet de "phe binh" cac tac gia khac, tu truoc den nay. 
Co le khong co gi de noi ve loi "phe binh" do, nhung neu phai neu vai nhan 
xet thi toi cung se mao muoi viet ra, chi xin bac cho vai ngay cho cai dau 
no "nguoi" da. :-))

>Ba'c cu+' ddo.c tu+` tu+` ro^`i vie^'t sau cu~ng ddu+o+.c. To^i thi'ch
>su+. pha'n xe't co' ca+n cu+' chu+' cu+' du+.a va`o va`i ba ca^u hay
>va`i ddoa.n va+n  ho+' he^nh cu?a mo^.t ngu+o+`i ma` cho ngu+o+`i ta
>do^'t na't thi` to^i nghi~ la` qua' vo^.i va~.

Hoan toan dong y voi bac!

>   To^i  ho+i kha'c vo+'i o^ng tha^`y  ve^` ca'ch nhi`n ve^` "ga^y so'ng
>gio'" tre^n va+n dda`n.
>  Giu+~a sa^n bo'ng ha.ng xoa`ng thi` co' the^? co' ca^`u thu? to^`i ga^y
>so'ng gio' nhu+ng trong mo^.t ddo^.i bo'ng ta^`m co+~ thi` anh cha`ng
>na`y (ne^'u co') se~ bi. mo+`i ddi nha+.t bo'ng cho ddo^`ng ddo^.i ta^.p
>tru+o+'c khi bi. mo+`i ra kho?i ddo^.i hi`nh vi~nh vie^~n.

Xin bac doc them mot chut cai mesg toi viet tra loi bac Hoa (Tuan), de hieu 
toi noi ve "song gio", tuc la "song gio" nhu the nao.

Va lai, neu mot cau thu toi, nhung da chan nguoi khac co hieu qua, va nhat 
la anh ta lai duoc phep lam dieu do, thi toi gi ma khong "dung" anh ta?

Xin cham dut cai so sanh ve cau thu bong da o day, vi no khong phai do toi 
nghi ra!

>  Va+n ho.c o+? ta^`m co+~ quo^'c gia khong pha?i la` xo' la`ng Vu~ DDa.i
>dde^? ca'c chu' Chi' Phe`o tha ho^` chu+?i, mo^.t ke? do^'t na't kho^ng
>the^? vie^'t ra ddu+o+.c nhu+~ng thu+' ga^y xo^n xao va+n dda`n chu+'
>ddu+`ng no'i dde^'n chuye^.n ga^y  so'ng gio'. Muo^'n la`m Chi' Phe`o
>trong va+n ho.c pha?i co' tri' tue^. va` ta`i na+ng chu+' kho^ng pha?i
>chi? ca^`n mo^.t ma?nh chai vo+~ la` ddu?.

Cai nay, toi chua du suc de nhan xet xem co dung hay khong. Nhung de chinh 
xac hoa, toi nghi la ta nen viet nhu sau: Muo^'n la`m Chi' Phe`o
MOT CACH DA`I HA.N trong va+n ho.c pha?i co' tri' tue^. va` ta`i na+ng chu+' 
kho^ng pha?i chi? ca^`n mo^.t ma?nh chai vo+~ la` ddu?."

>  Co' the^? nhu+ ba'c vie^'t: TMH ba^'t ca^.p trong phong ca'ch phe^
>bi`nh cu?a mi`nh. DDie^?m na`y to^i nghi~ co' the^? co'. Nhu+ng "ra^'t
>ke'm co?i" thi` ba'c ho+i...vo^.i cha+ng?.

Toi xin duoc giu nhan xet (ve kha nang PHE BINH VA LY LUAN cua TMH; toi 
khong co y noi ve cac "bo mon" khac cua ong ay) nay cua minh.

>   Ba'c HL o+i, to^i co' tha^'y chi'nh quye^`n le^n tie^'ng dda^u ma`
>o^ng TMH phu. ho.a nhi?.

Nhan xet tren cua toi khong phai ung voi "CHCC", ma ung voi nhung truong hop 
da xay ra, bac a.. Nhung co le ta nen cham dut de tai nay, chi ban ve "CHCC" 
hay ban ve bai "phe binh" "CHCC" cua TMH, thi hay hon, phai khong bac?

>  Tri`nh ddo^. ca?m thu. va+n ho.c nghe^. thua^.t cu?a to^i kho^ng
>ddu+o+.c cao la+'m ne^n kho^ng da'm ba`n ky~ nhu+ng xem ra ba`i phe^
>bi`nh cu?a TMH kho^ng pha?i la` thu+' ma` ba'c dde^` ca^.p dda^u.
>Ma+.c du` to^i kho^ng co' ddu+o+.c ca'i ca?m gia'c de^~ chi.u khi ddo.c
>ba`i phe^ bi`nh na`y, nhu+ng va+n phong kho^ng co' mu`i bo^`i bu't.
>  To^i tu+`ng ddu+o+.c nghe ra+`ng va+n phe^ bi`nh cu?a TMH nhu+ phi?
>ba'ng ngu+o+`i vie^'t, ddo.c ba`i na`y thi` mo+'i bie^'t-:)). The^'
>nhu+ng kha'c vo+'i va`i ba'c dda~ nha^.n xe't, to^i kho^ng tha^'y ca'i
>mu~ na`o trong tay TMH ca?. chi? tha^'y ca^y roi va` ca^y gia'o-:)))

Ai ma dam vo nguc tu khen minh la co trinh do cam thu van hoc nghe thuat 
cao, ho+? bac?

Toi se viet ve bai "phe binh" cua TMH sau, duoc khong bac?

>    Ba'c a., tre^n VNSA na`y tha^.m chi' o+? ba^'t cu+' dda^u, nhu+~ng
>sa?n pha^?m tri' tue^. dde^`u mang ti'nh chu? quan. Va^'n dde^` o+?
>cho^~ la` ca'i chu? quan cu?a ngu+o;`i vie^'t co' cha?y cu`ng do`ng
>vo+'i dda so^' ngu+o;`i ddo.c hay kho^ng, ca'i chu? quan ddo' co' la`
>sa?n pha^?m cu?a tu+ duy logic du+.a tre^n ca'c cu+' lie^.u xa'c dda'ng
>kho^ng. Ne^'u chi? la^'y thie^n kie^'n cu?a mi`nh dde^? pha'n da.y
>ngu+o+`i kha'c thi` to^i cha+?ng mong ba'c vie^'t, nhu+ng qua nhu+~ng
>ba`i vie^'t cu?a ba'c la^u nay to^i tin ba'c se~ kho^ng dde^? su+.
>ddi.nh kie^'n na`o ddo' ne^'u co' bo'p me'o nhu+~ng nha^.n xe't cu?a
>ba'c ve^` TMH.

OK voi bac.

>   La^u nay ca'i "chu? quan" cu?a ba'c co' ve? cha?y co' do`ng
>dda^'y-:))))

Do`ng gi ho+? ba'c? Va do`ng, hay gio`ng? :-))

>  Ve^` khuo^n kho^? VNSA to^i cho la` ddang qua' ro^.ng cho dde^` ta`i
>na`y ddo', cha+?ng le~ la.i co' ddie^`u gi` trong v/d ve^` TMH vu+o+.t
>kho?i ca'i  khung co da~n cu?a VNSA na`y-:)))

Cu~ng khong biet chu+`ng, bac a.. Du sao, toi cu~ng co^'...

>
>    DDo^`'ng y' vo+'i ba'c, dde^? dda'nh gia' ddu'ng ca^`n pha?i ddo.c
>ky~.  Gia' nhu+ nhu+~ng ba`i ddo' dda~ ddu+o+.c lu+u tru+~ trong ma'y
>cu?a ba'c (kho^ng ca^`n pha?i go~ nu+~a) thi` xin phe'p ba'c cho to^i
>ddu+o+.c xem qua mo^.t chu't nhe'-:))

Neu bac cho dia chi, toi se gui mot so cuon sach ma toi co trong tay, de bac 
tham khao.

Hi vong se con co dip trao doi voi bac!

HLinh


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